Just a couple things.
Well, I think I needn't point this out - the graphics were, for the most part, very well drawn. But I'm afraid I must bring to attention what seems to me to be rather inept writing skills. While I did enjoy some scenes more than I should, ("And Sephiroth, stop listening to your music!") others were childish or overused (staring at Quistis' chest) or just plain completely irrelevant (The Kami-sama DBZ bit). So, regardless of whether or not you heed my advice, I look forward to the next installment of this 'series', if it can be called that. But either a cleverly witty (nuklearpower) or intellectual, in depth (FinalFightingFantasy) style of writing would bring this flash, more or less, to the borders of a masterpiece. That's my opinion, to say the least.